OK Cole –
I think it’s good to get inside the Psalm and its structure/how it is crafted – even if it seems tedious at first. So I’ll suggest that it has three main divisions and ask a few questions of you and others to get the ball rolling
Ascribe to the Lord, O heavenly beings,
ascribe to the Lord glory and strength.
2 Ascribe to the Lord the glory due his name;
worship the Lord in the splendor of holiness.
Who is being addressed here. Is it the reader or some others?
3 The voice of the Lord is over the waters;
the God of glory thunders,
the Lord, over many waters.
4 The voice of the Lord is powerful;
the voice of the Lord is full of majesty.
5 The voice of the Lord breaks the cedars;
the Lord breaks the cedars of Lebanon.
6 He makes Lebanon to skip like a calf,
and Sirion like a young wild ox.
7 The voice of the Lord flashes forth flames of fire.
8 The voice of the Lord shakes the wilderness;
the Lord shakes the wilderness of Kadesh.
9 The voice of the Lord makes the deer give birth
and strips the forests bare,
and in his temple all cry, “Glory!”
What natural phenomena is being described here as begin caused by the Lord and a revelation of the Lord? ( I think the pregnant deer in verse 9 may be going into labour caused by fright. Lebanon and Sirion, or Hermon, are the two principal mountains of Palestine, Hermon being visible throughout almost the whole extent of the Holy Land, and Lebanon enjoying a commanding position beyond Galilee to the north.)
What does the image ‘The voice of the Lord flashes forth flames of fire’ refer to literally?
What do you make of the sevenfold repetition of ‘The voice of the Lord’ here?
10 The Lord sits enthroned over the flood;
the Lord sits enthroned as king forever.
11 May the Lord give strength to his people!
May the Lord bless his people with peace!
Does the last part contrast with the rest in any way - especially as a contrast to the middle part. Is there a paradox implicit here?
‘The Lord sits enthroned over the flood’ – what does this mean?
Overall what is the main way in which this poem is structured and patterned in its language, Is there any obvious way in which the structure of the first two verses and the final two verse is identical so as to give a sense of completeness and coming full circle